Could use some input on this new shirt design Please

[FloridaBill]

The artist is done with the image part of the design for the new shirt. I could use some more input on the text if any you folks think it should have? I will also have the text in and area so it will be able to be removed if not wanted or different text added. Of course the watermark in the center will be removed.



I appreciate the few folks that have had some input for me in this project....

 

[The Beep Goes On]

Hmmmm...I like it, but my first question was "what is he going to dig with"...maybe put a sandscoop in his hands. Maybe have the coil over the target (or at least closer to) with some type of "signal" graphics around the coil, as if he had just detected it (I know this was the intent, but just having the exclamation point doesn't convey the message adequately).

 

[vibes]

Can ya make him look a little more "Hugh" like?

And will you be creating one w/ a woman on it?

 

[Woodland Detectors]

It looks like he is peering into the clear blue water thinking, " geeez, who needs a metal detector"? " I can see everything right on top of the sand"!

Seriously, it's a cool shirt.

 

[packerbacker]

Just some suggestions. You had it made for your own reasons so what I think may be way off from what you wanted. Another note; he doesn't appear to be wearing shoes of any sort yet his individual toes don't show. Maybe just a sunken, partially opened treasure chest half buried in the sand would look better than all the misc. stuff portrayed. Could possibly have small lightening bolts emitting from earphones instead of detector. Just muddling thoughts around here.

 

[Iron Patch]

"Kyle I shakin', I'm shakin' man!"

 

[hammered]

It looks like he is peering into the clear blue water thinking, " geeez, who needs a metal detector"? " I can see everything right on top of the sand"!

Seriously, it's a cool shirt.

WowI need new glasses... again, I thought you wrote peeing into the water .

hammered

 

[Iron Patch]

X marks the spot? Is that the brand, or am I missing something?