I'll take a crack at this one - but first have to ask this: What size gold do you generally find in your area? Are you in an area of overly-fine gold, or somewhere where you might even land a 1/2 oz. or larger nugget?
Next question - what size pump do you have? How many GPM's?
If looking for really fine gold, I like the general idea in your last photo, with the rod running inline with the water flow. However, I would have terminated the rods at the end of the tube and then add a layer of expanded metal over the rods, formed to the shape of the rods. Then at the end of the tube, I would leave the end open except for a ridge that rises maybe 1/4" to 1/2" higher than the expanded metal. That would allow ALL larger material to work out the end of the trap without clogging up. Gold being heavy would ("should") drop down in the low-pressure area between the rods. However, don't think you'd need that many rods - probably only enough to work as spacers for the expanded. Could even choose to put some miners moss under the rods if you're worried about losing any gold.
If in California or other area where it's possible to get a 1/2 oz. or larger nugget...have been thinking about this while writing the first part. I think a similar setup would also work for this, but you'd be limited to the size of gold saved according to what will readily fit through the expanded. Might be better to have a 2-stage system in this case. Have an area that ALL material flows over, but traps the very fine gold (as above), then have a nugget trap for the REALLY good stuff!
My thought on this is, how are you keeping the unit laterally level? If you use "rods", as in the first section, and if the unit turns, then you'll lose some of your catchment capacity. Turn the system more on its side and you may start losing gold. So you'll have to have a system for keeping the unit from rolling to one side or the other, as well as keeping it relatively level lengthwise. Maybe have the unit suspended from a surface float? But then what happens where the water is too active? ...Am starting to see some of the thinking that went into the Bazooka dredge systems.
Well, that's all I have. Keep in mind that I'm not even a novice - just someone with a long-held interest in prospecting!! So hopefully this will be a good start for some of the more experienced folks to jump in.
EDIT - Only told of using a tube design, but I would personally prefer a boxed design. Guess I got tunnel-visioned on that last pic.
EDIT #2 - With the expanded metal, I would think it should be set so that it helps water to flow into the miners moss and flush out the lighter materials. In the attached pic, water should flow bottom to top (assuming the pic loads properly).
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