Hola Jeff
Well done! the Dramatization was perfect. The visuals of the event you was telling was really good amigo.
Yet there is much more to telling the story.
A voice over giving more information Especially if your introducing an history event, era leading up the the treasure and the name of the person how had hidden the gold. How it became known to others. And those who have searched for it etc... Its always nice to leave open for people to dare to dream of finding it. Depending on how you structure your stories. Best to work in the confines of 5 minute 10 minute or 20 minute time frame.
Some stories are more in depth and perhaps need to be filmed in parts.
The average person today has an attention span of pea :-) So to capture the imagination of people is not an easy task. So a quick introduction of when where and how will set the scene re enacted in some parts to give life to the story.
One thing everything is much harder than it looks doing. Your show has much promise but one thing I ask of you is not follow the current crop of producers in reality crap. I personally rather like the old way of telling the story. voice over drifting into a story then re enactment in part of story drifting back in sweeping scenes of alleged treasure location telling the story daring the viewer to dream.
Mal
